Nice first Flash
It was OK for a first Flash, but I know you can do better! ^-^
I suggest drawing faces, adding outlines, and some more animation.
I liked how you drew everything though, it gives it sort of a South Park-ish feel... :P
Anyways, good luck on your next Flash, I hope you go far on Newgrounds! :D
Thank you for the good review. I will try harder its not my fault about the sound btw, I dont know why but as soon as i got it onto newgrounds the sound went completely out of time. It was fine on my laptop I dont know what happened. Thanks again :D
This movie was very creative and interesting to watch.
I also loved to Madness Combat styled characters. I know you weren't trying to make them look like that.
I think that you were trying to make it a comical cartoon short. If so, congratulations! ^-^
You accomplished your goal! :D
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